8 -- Hi, everyone. You now have some notes on ways to develop your writing and add more information, details, and interest: D.R.A.P.E.S. When you are reviewing your work, think about what parts of D.R.A.P.E.S. you can use.
Your revised draft is due submitted to this form no later than 6:30 p.m. Friday. You can also find the form on Rediker under our links.
Your revised draft is due submitted to this form no later than 6:30 p.m. Friday. You can also find the form on Rediker under our links.
7 -- Good work on your narratives. Today you should have further developed your story using sensory language, transitions, vivid verbs, awesome adjectives, and literary devices. Your slideshow is due on Tuesday when you come to class.